Critique

Thanks for the pointers Shoofly. You want my entries short. Good great grand wonderful. I bet on the college bball game of Depaul and NW last night. I was going for Depaul and they lost so I lost money to Ed. It sucked. I drank beer. I drank water. I hiked up more than 500 steps. I saw Shoo, Ed, Mandy, Lu, Kirsten, Jessie, Natalie, Kurt, Kristine. Great to see all of you. You want a beaten man. You like that better. SO BE IT! This will be my only entry for today. Good bye.